What histories are written in the feet? Who can read the lines? Steps through the years. The earth presses against our feet. Ancient bone runes, graveyards rising, shoes fill with dirt, with seeds that unfurl cartographies inscribed in swirls of lines, ridges and hollows that map life in calloused, toughened skin.
These animal pads.
Their
finely boned dance.
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Boy, did you have fun with this prompt, Brenda! So did I, but your haibun is so imaginativer. I loved the picture show.
ReplyDeleteA really original visual and verbal take on the theme.
ReplyDeleteWow! I love your creative take on the feet prompt! You painted the perfect picture in my head.
ReplyDeleteHow often we ignore our feet, and take them for granted! I thought this was a beautiful posting, Brenda.
ReplyDeleteSam x
Wow! What a wonderful celebration of the prompt. Really makes me want to try your visual process on my own feet. Love the whole of it.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Brenda this is fantastic. I can see you had fun with this.
ReplyDeletePamela
Brenda this is fantastic. I can see you had fun with this.
ReplyDeletePamela
How Fun! Love the poem and the feet!
ReplyDeleteWhat great fun.
ReplyDeleteHey, thanks everyone!
ReplyDeleteViv, Dick, Laurie, Sam, Elizabeth, Pam, Jeanne, & Linda!
It was a sudden rush late last night. I had to get out my bare feet.
Though perhaps the description of the footprinting process may have taken away from the seriousness of the prosepoem, I'm not sure.
One might have inclined towards art; the other, camp.
Like our two feet, huh?
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Stomping Tom Brenda
Fantastic! I love the poem and your process of exploring your feet. "Animal pads" is awesome.
ReplyDeleteI love the phrase "ancient bone ruins" as well as the last two lines.
ReplyDeleteWonderful response.
gorgeous poem. the images are packed and the distillation at the end perfect.
ReplyDeleteVery, very nice - full of beauty, thought and vibrancy.
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone -you're all so sweet!
ReplyDeleteSweet on the feet.