Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Dawn, the momentary effect

when love's flame
rises

encroaching the dark
birds singing dawn, chirping
grace

or finally knowing what to do,
after such a long time
of unknowing

spreading a caul of light over
the horizon

until the sky is clear, safe, free,

and you may continue on

3 comments:

  1. "spreading a caul of light over
    the horizon"

    Lovely!

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  2. Anonymous12:27 PM

    "...and you may continue on."

    Setting free.

    Yes, yes, yes.

    Oh, I like this composition.

    Blessings~

    ReplyDelete

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