Showing posts with label Nanowrimo 2011. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Nanowrimo 2011. Show all posts
Saturday, January 14, 2012
Coil of Koi in Dark Water
Coil of Koi in Dark Water, 21cm x 29cm, 8" x 11.5", 2012, Moleskine folio Sketchbook, multi-media.
Finished, unless I slightly whiten some of those Koi edges. I sparingly brushed the koi with some translucent paints (vellum, blue, orange, yellow), which glimmer. The fish have a pearlescence that you can see if you tilt the painting in the light.
They are like angels rising from Dante's Inferno.
Earlier version:
Coil of Fish, 21cm x 29cm, 8" x 11.5", 2012, Moleskine folio Sketchbook, multi-media.
I have rubbed this out many times! Was going to scratch the koi out and add oranges, yellows, golds; so far, it's not working. I used a wooden toothpick to scratch the koi out, but the underpainting of acrylic 'bone black' had dried too much, leaving them with a ghostly presence.
They are like angels rising in dark water, and I may have to just accept that.
In process!
From my recent NaNo novel: 'When the plump Chinese lady who owned the store came over to feed the koi, the fish swirled to the top of the tank, a mass of watercolours and oils coiling and curving and looping in and out of each other as each fish rose to eat bits of the koi feed. Their gills translucent against the misted windows of the store.
The glass thinned, melted and the koi are flung out of the tank as the water rushed out, a coiling, spawning tidal wave. The gills of the koi became soft wings, they grew like when you drop a stopper of ink into water and patterns of ink coil and flow outwards and upwards as they disperse. The koi’s filmy, translucent wings spread and grew thinner as they rose, a coiling mass of golds, oranges, yellows and browns, a living tree spinning upwards, a whirlpool of fish like leaves flowing into the sky, for the ceiling had disappeared.'
Tuesday, November 15, 2011
NaNoWriMo 2011 excerpt
Still 1400 words to go tonight, but you can see why I hit a rough patch, and was resisting writing. My characters are going through a lot. This story, like most of my NaNoWriMo novellas, is dark, troubled. It is full of densities, difficulties. That's why I haven't been posting bits.
The green invaded everything.
It took over the plane like a fungus, a fine film of sticky mould. Or like the encrusted barnacles of a long drowned boat. Inside the cabin she saw it growing up the curved walls and over the ceiling, a corrosive green lace.
She felt it in the corners of her eyes, and when she looked at her brother she saw the green seeping through his hair, his skin became jaundiced as the fine feathery lace spread down his face and arms. A fine green mist hung in the air; they were all breathing it. The passengers, the flight crew.
Her mother woke back in their house in her bed unable to move because she was tied by the green ivy that had grown around her in the night.
She lay like a fly in a spider’s green net. Something tasted bitter in her mouth and when she brushed her tongue over the back of her hand she saw her saliva was a deep, algae green.
The ivy had grown through her room and filled it with tendrils that had claws which stuck to everything, the ceiling, walls, floors, the bedroom furniture, it had crept under the broadloom which was dissolving. It covered the windows with its hungry green leafy mouths, making the room dark.
Her teeth began falling out of her gums, and she spat them out, but some stuck in her throat and she coughed, and coughed.
She could not reach her phone; she did not know where the phone was in the jungle her room had become overnight.
Or had it always been like this? She could not remember, the green was seeping into her brain.
She was shaking, or being shaken.
Slowly she opened her eyes, and saw Curtis saying, “Do up your seatbelt, we’re arriving.”
Steig shook. “I had a dream, a nightmare, the green was invading everything. Mother was encased in green ivy.”
“Ha! She’d deserve that,” he said.
“It was worse, Curtis… like I was her by the end, coughing out my teeth, my brain seeping with green.”
He sighed. “Never mind, sis. It was only a dream. You’ve been asleep for hours. Dad will be waiting for us at Heathrow.”
“Can I go to the bathroom?”
“Not now. Can’t you feel the plane is descending?”
“Yeah, I guess so. I’m thirsty.”
“Steig… you’re my older sister. Stop acting like a baby.”
She lay back against the high nap of the chair, on edge, waiting to feel the bump of rubber wheels on tarmac. Such a delicate and crucial moment, touching earth.
When the plane landed lightly with a gentle thud and kept moving, but parallel to the ground, she breathed with relief.
The air was invisible, clear. Without any green tinges. Her brother’s hair was dirty blonde, there was no green ink seeping through it. Her fingers were lace free.
Yet the dream remained with her, colouring her vision.
The best part had been the attack of the plants on her mother, wrapping her like spider-prey in a web of green vines. The natural world gone awry had moved to de-potentiate her. It imprisoned her in organic shackles. Thinking about that part of the dream, Steig felt safe for the first time since she had returned from school the day before to meet her mother’s fury, and the green whip which her brother had broken.
When he broke it it revealed itself as a magic spell that was worthless now.
Soon the plane stopped rolling and the door opened and the passengers began filing off. Curtis and Steig waited in line to exit.
Monday, November 14, 2011
NaNoWriMo ongoing and on track
I forgot to post a widget this year to mark my progress. Other than falling behind a bit near the beginning, which I did catch up on, I've been steadily making my 2000 words a day and am now just over half way to the finish line of 50,000 words.
No excerpts to share, sorry. The story has taken such a different direction to the one I had originally thought that I'm trying to keep up with it, even as I resist writing it. It's far too late now, and I spent all day resisting, and all night, but the words came anyhow, one after the other, sentence after sentence until I came to a place to stop and looked at the word count. Ah, time to rest, to sleep perchance?
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