Thursday, December 13, 2007

Lights in the Pre-Dawn

Lights - 2

4 comments:

  1. write the lights coming
    solstice approaches and clues

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  2. Mysterious "d," for you...

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  3. thank you for this touch of ether -

    buoyed light shaping solstice
    spacious refrain
    "singing the body electric"
    longing in pace of trace
    what happens next will happen next
    to you - textuate -

    utter silence
    drift across coldscape
    paint breath and dance
    slow and in visible
    stir
    crystalline

    snow's descent
    floating water -

    listen in ice
    blinking at syllable's
    hush
    nothing nothing nothing is something
    blinks back

    where am i
    in words not my language
    plain - that is to say -
    sheets and slips
    paging mnenosyne
    riffle through loss
    utterly
    untranslateable

    yet led to water now
    the shadow side of wave
    and glass
    coracles.

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  4. d, extraordinary.

    Such a beautiful poem!

    Your words, I read them aloud. You weave a complexity of language with the natural landscape and the drifting of the snow, which is water and ice, how amazingly you work with this imagery, with a rhythm that is musical and as delicate as a snowflake.

    I am humbled. Thank you...

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A Pulsing Imagination - Ray Clews' Paintings

A video of some of my late brother Ray's paintings and poems I wrote for them. Direct link: https://youtu.be/V8iZyORoU9E ___