Tuesday, January 04, 2011

Stone #4: A Rock Dove

Clap of wings, a ledge. Street grey, pin black eyes- the pavement where I walk, or the fleeing sky, or a flock pecking bagel bits.

(I balk at putting the word 'watch' in, and hope you, the reader, can parse it anyhow.

Okay, putting it in:

Clap of wings, a ledge. Street grey, pin black eyes watch
the pavement where I walk, or the fleeing sky, or a flock pecking bagel bits.

Without it, the missing verb appears anyhow. You should leap from the ledge to the view. No, I don't have to say imaginatively, I don't. No, no.)
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A River
of Stones



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2 comments:

  1. Love your mutterings between the 2 versions! And I like both versions! Each has its own face and personality!

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  2. You made me laugh, Gemma! Thanks.

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