Cracked and dry as a desert. Denuded of identity, warmth, flush skin tones. No bright highlights, no glamour. Bodies risen from clay pools, an earthen pottery.
No colour, erase difference. Frozen white ghosts on the edge of time, a sea of pale mud, a genesis.
You are Adam and Eve, the beginning of all beginnings, or the end of all endings. Face each other, relinquish your loneliness.
Your skin hardened like living statues in a dissolving Garden of Eden, the smeared powdered rock, breathing clay, imprisoned in your own beauty.
Or Butoh dancers, the anguish of the bomb that whitens into ash,
pain rising as dying reeds sway in the blackened river,
encase yourselves with white wet dust,
obliterate yourselves
In it, roll in it, emotion, explosive,
hidden in those primal masks,
naked in your ghostly forms,
raw spirits rising.
Pass beyond the eye
of my camera
To the dark side of the moon.
Sink into your bodies,
into each other.
(background music, a tiny section of 'Bodydrama at The Nave,' by ARTSomerville)
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photo by Marko Kulik
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In response to a Big Tent poetry prompt: Write a poem about a portrait photograph that you did not take yourself: "The strategy this week is that you will imagine the photographer and write about the subject as if from the point of view of the photographer."As a photographer, I am a director of the shot as I describe the poetry of the scene to the actors so that they can become what I am looking for.
See here for the prompt and links to the other poems.
Without the process notes I would have been at a loss, but now all is clear. A tour de force.
ReplyDeleteI took out all the 'I would like you to...' 'Strive to be equal' 'Be like Adam & Eve' 'Think of Butoh dancers' and so on because those phrases didn't work in the poem.
ReplyDeleteNot sure what I ended up with - a portrait of the poetry of the portrait in the making?
I've watched a couple of director's movies, and it can be like that - a director asking his or her actors to move and act according to poetic metaphor. Also I took a Butoh workshop with Denise Fujiwara and she ran the whole dance class with metaphor, everyone tipping as water about to fall out a jug.
Thanks for your feedback, Viv. Yes, stage directions, or what the photographer is hoping to elicit from the actors in a portrait caught on film.
Except of course it already happened and we're working backwards.
Wow! Terrific.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Christopher...
ReplyDeleteI love the peek behind the curtain your process notes contained. It's like a 'bonus feature' on a DVD...
ReplyDeleteHaving worked as both a photographer and an actor, I can see that your arc is clearly stated. Wow! Just brilliant.
ReplyDeletePeek behind the curtain, Mark, I like that... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, lightverse, I really appreciate your comment.
ReplyDeleteWhile many photographs are accidental moments that are beautiful for their spontaneity, or snapshots, deliberate takes of a moment in time, sometimes the photographer creates a scene or a moment in an action that is imbued with the poetry that he or she is seeking to convey. That creative process is what I was trying to get at, to emulate somehow or other in this prosepoem, I guess.
Thank you...
Brenda, this is a brilliant piece and thanks for the process notes.
ReplyDeletePamela
Pamela, thanks for a lovely comment, and I'm smiling - thinking the process perhaps more interesting than the product... ::
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
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Wow! Nifty!
ReplyDeleteBrenda, this is amazing. So many images to ponder.
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An eloquent and descriptive masterpiece... I love how you posted the photo underneath the poem.
ReplyDelete~laurie
I read, then listened. Then saw. I think you achieved your goal. It was fascinating, of a part, of a whole.
ReplyDeleteThe listened to words "white wet dust" fantastic. Such a hard (but wonderful) kernel in the work.
Thanks for writing with us, for your unique and wonderful "take" on the world.
Thanks so much again for taking the time to write this fabulous poem which goes VERY well with my image.
ReplyDeleteYour reading voice is fantastic and extremely expressive.
I am truly touched.
Sincerely - Marko Kulik